Momentum

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Momentum

January 5, 2007, 6:23 pm

A Shot At Stardom. Combining grace, precision and flair, a local instructor prepares students for the USA Roller Sports Speed and Figure Skating Championships in the towns civc center, recently...

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January 5, 2007, 9:03 pm

lovely wendyand not that you need any of my suggestions butI would reverse the last two linesand end on her mouth the red orchidfeels to me a much stronger line for closinglovely imagesnicely...

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January 6, 2007, 1:24 am

her mouth burning throughthe summer haze, a red orchid.Ms. DeidreIndigo

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January 6, 2007, 1:25 am

s4 is my favorite stropheMs. DeidreIndigo

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January 6, 2007, 2:17 am

lush and graceful.i like it.regardsedenNavel Orange

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January 7, 2007, 11:09 pm

Enjoyed this one, Wendy.What a great image in those last 2 lines.take care, kerri

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DorothyThank you so miuch for reading this. I think you have a strong and interesting suggestion here. This poem is never finishe or at least it seems every few years, I pull it out and re-edit. Your...

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January 8, 2007, 10:54 pm

.Her influence gleaming on them, on herselffive years later, fuses past and present.Lost skills redeem the recluseand pride bloomsin the vibrant shade of a flower -- "the vibrant shade of a flower" is...

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Re: Momentum

January 9, 2007, 5:52 pm

Hi NeilThank you so much for your wonderful and insightful perspective regarding this poem. I think you have defined much of what I was hoping to portray through this woman's ordeal. I really...

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